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Annoyance Offline Resident Cosplayer

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29th March 2016 12:03 AM
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I've been putting off making a thread for my writing here for some reason so I'm making one now.

First piece is the one I've put a lot of effort into, and it's going to be published in the college literary magazine I'm working on this semester as well. I'm kind of proud of it. What a shocker.

The Stone House:
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29th March 2016 02:09 AM
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More coming in a bit.

Ten Minutes
The snow drifts across the parking lot. Small flakes begin to clump and soon it looks like snow balls being lightly dropped onto the Earth.

You’re sitting in the passenger seat of my car, resting your eyes, chin in your hand. Silence.
I reach for your hand and grasp it. Fingers twist to interlock in this blissful, still moment. The cold can be felt on your fingers, the contrast of warmth lighting me up. The smirk raises your lip slightly and makes me laugh.

You open your eyes, and join me in watching the snow pile up on the window. Soon, darkness will come, the street lights won’t even see us together. Complete disconnection from the world. Only me, and you.

Business as Usual:

Ticking Clock Bed:

Bread:
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29th March 2016 03:18 AM
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Literally just finished this one so uh, it's super rough but.
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29th March 2016 06:58 PM
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Should I post haikus?
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30th March 2016 12:05 AM
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(29th March 2016 06:58 PM)Annoyance Wrote:  Should I post haikus?

Yay! Do it! Haikus are cool.
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30th March 2016 03:46 AM
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I have to cut and paste the ones I've posted on my twitter.

Follow @sa8oteur if you wanna see my stuff. :v

Also Meiwaku on Medium.
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1st April 2016 09:11 PM
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I keep forgetting to do the thing I said I was going to with my haikus but there are barely any responses. @n@!
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5th April 2016 04:52 AM
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So here's all the haiku I have up on my twitter.

Again, if you wanna follow me, here's a link: https://twitter.com/sa8oteur

Leaf on the swift wind
Carry me through the bare trees.
Settled down on the ground.


Overwhelming dread.
Midterms are coming and I,
Well, shit, fuck, ass, dicks.


Sirens heard blaring.
My heart shrinks and hides away
Becoming harsh stone.


Bite the tongue kissing
Push away any feelings
The barriers rise.



Rivers are flowing
To and fro, my heart's beating
Blood flowing in veins



Where does the time go?
Watching snowflakes fall slowly
Hold my hand and stare.



I will destroy you
Hearts broken and shadows cast
We will rebuild "us"



Butterflies consume
They become my very soul
When I am with you.


Do not stomp on me
Through flame and ashes, believe
I will rise again.
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12th April 2016 06:33 AM
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Here's a story I posted way back in 2009. It was a conflict prompted writing assignment from school and then I found it today going down memory lane and decided to take a crack at fixing the shit out of it.

It's now kind of pieced together and needs more work but... hey that's what you guys are for???

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HELP ME.

Need a Name:

also if it matters you can find my twitter at @sa8oteur

i swear this will be the last time i change it i'm so bad at this i shouldn't be allowed to change.
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24th April 2016 12:58 AM
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24th April 2016 02:34 AM
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Fleeting Ghosts:

essentially because i need an assignment filler and need to write 3 reflections right now...
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24th April 2016 07:24 AM
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i dig all of your haikus. the tragic quality is something i dont often see in the format which is refreshing. your latest, i like the fantastical, supernatural aspect mixed in with the more modern element of "[seeing] the new reincarnation of his new life on my newsfeed on Facebook." supernatural or fantasy elements mixing in with ones we encounter regularly in the digital age has always been a favorite theme of mine.

i really want to get into writing haikus like i used to yeaaars ago. its a format i enjoy and writing atypical things in it would be fun.

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24th April 2016 05:17 PM
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(24th April 2016 07:24 AM)coyote rituals Wrote:  i dig all of your haikus. the tragic quality is something i dont often see in the format which is refreshing. your latest, i like the fantastical, supernatural aspect mixed in with the more modern element of "[seeing] the new reincarnation of his new life on my newsfeed on Facebook." supernatural or fantasy elements mixing in with ones we encounter regularly in the digital age has always been a favorite theme of mine.

i really want to get into writing haikus like i used to yeaaars ago. its a format i enjoy and writing atypical things in it would be fun.
I'm glad you like them! They're coming easier to me now too. I've gotten into two haiku smack downs now too Hahaha.

I'm also glad you liked the metaphor there. The piece is meant to emphasize a metaphor so I'm glad the assignment wasn't garbage.

You definitely should write some haiku I think you would be great at them.
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26th April 2016 04:42 AM
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Ghosts of you staring
The hairs on my neck flare up
Shadowed memories


Everything moves on
Continuing past me here
Days leave me hollow


Where have my words gone?
To describe how you make me
Take my words, my dear.
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5th May 2016 10:17 PM
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Nice writings! Cannot wait to see more.
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5th May 2016 11:12 PM
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(5th May 2016 10:17 PM)ScientificToast Wrote:  Nice writings! Cannot wait to see more.
Thank you! I'm glad you like them.
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14th August 2016 11:11 PM
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Aight so I wrote some things for a contest going on at another forum, so I wanted to post these since I put off typing them up. They don't have much time spent on them, not very good, but worth posting because I need to.

Here's the first one, themed with "Dearly Beloved" which is taken as you will, and I chose to write about Kara, my girlfriend.

Kara (Dearly Beloved):

Second one's theme was First/Last
I chose to talk about the first time I smoked.


My First Cigarette:
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4th November 2016 03:19 PM
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newer haiku that i never posted i may have messed up on the cut and paste but w/e
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Rain on my new shoes
Blisters felt as I walk on
Broken in, and sore.


Everything will pass
Leaves and snow and rain and sun
Life will continue


Head phones worn today
The loud silence in my ears
World shut out from me


Don't give it power,
The sticky mess inside you.
It will grow stronger.


Your eyes are shining
Through the muck, this foggy world,
Staring back, grinning.


Summer breeze blowing.
Fireflies trapped in a jar.
Please don't leave me here.


Everything moves on
Continuing past me here
Days leave me hollow
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